Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Circle Street

Hey folks

To start a blog, what I usually do is to share poems.
Sounds interesting right?
Now, here we go!


Circle Street

The cars, they run the circle streets,
little dots in harmonious replay,
round and repeat with no hope of destination;
like hamsters hard at their wheels.
Never ending, never knowing.

We run our own circle streets,
round and repeat till we die;
either of exhaustion or despair,
it matters not which.
And so ending, we are mocked

by the other hamsters,
hard at their own wheels.
Who in turn laugh their own who fall,
and they, those before;
and so, round and repeat, with no sight of a beginning.
And as before, no end.

We, hamsters hard at our beloved wheels,
round and repeat,
round and repeat.
Never knowing, never ending.


By Eric Low

5 comments:

Gilbert said...
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Gilbert said...

That's an interesting poem to share. Its message seems a bit bleak though.

What about your thoughts towards it? Share your ideas too!

Hai Qi said...

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lan said...

Hey Mr Gilbert! I do agree with your statements. Well, this poem did sort of portrayed today's society, realize that? I could only say that this peom totally engaged my full attention.

lan said...

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